Thursday, March 13, 2008

Wo Bachpan ki Baarish

Mujhe yaad hai wo bachpan ki baarish
jab daudte kadamo se chalakte the paani ki boondein
jab har titliyon ki peeche bhagte they wo nanhe kadam
jab har boondon mein dhoondte they wo meethey pal.
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Mujhe yaad hai wo bachpan ki baarish
jaha kagaz ki kashtiyon ki peeche bhagte they kadam
jaha har phoolon mein mitti ki khushboo talashte they hum
Jaha har ehasas hote hi ban jate they dil ki dhadkan.
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Mujhe yaad hai wo bachpan ki baarish
Jaha maa banati thi pyar bhare pakodiyan
Jaha babuji besabri se pochhte they humare bheege sar
jaha har taraf hoti thi wo pyari khushboo aur titliyan.
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Mujhe yaad hai wo Bachpan ki baarish
Jaha tum saath rehti thi mere
jaha har boondon ki ishare hote they sirf tumhare taraf
jaha har bheegte palo mein sirf ehsaas they tumhare.
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Mujhe yaad hai wo bachpan ki baarish
jab tum badalo ki awaaz se dar kho jaati thi meri baahon mein
jab main chup chap sehamta hua tumhe thaame rehta
jab tumhare julfon se tapakte hue boondon ko sahejta rehta main.
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Mujhe yaad hai wo bachpan ki baarish
jab humesha saath rehne ki kasmein khate they hum
jab meri har soch tumhare bheege chehre ko dekhkar jaati thi goom
jab har baat tumhari mujhse shuru hoker mujhpe hoti thi khatam.
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Mujhe aaj phir de do tum wo baarish
jab tumhe chhooke aati thi wo boondein
jab tumhare saath kagaz ki kashtiyon mein ghar basane ko hota tha mann
jab tumhare kaapti palkein mein sirf mere hi they sapne.
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- Sourish

7 comments:

  1. I'm speechless buddy..!!
    Kitni khoobsurti se ek ek lavz ko tarasha hai tumne..
    Kitni saadgi se ek ek lamhe ko sawara hai tumne..

    Its beautiful...somehow I'm reminded of my schoolmates, not about my puppy love days, though that aspect is always gonna be there.

    Tumhari yeh pehli kavita hai kya? Ye phir tum pehle bhi likha karte the..? I'd love to read your other compositions too. You know, how I dig poetry anyway..

    Amazing !!!



    p.s : You ok dear ?

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  2. cindy...

    thank u thank u

    i dont write normally

    dis one just came in flow..i wrote it within minutes..
    Dis was not my fst..i got a diary full but mostly in english
    hindi par mera fst try tha ...
    I liked dat u liked it..

    about ok...
    kind of ok dear..

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  3. Hey then you must post the others ya !!
    I and I'm sure the others too would love reading it.


    About the 'kind of ok'...do you wanna talk about it ?
    Ping me at cinderellasays@gmail if you feel like it.

    Take care.

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  4. nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

    utna bada tag :((
    main kaise khatam karooonga :(((((

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  5. oh! m back to my bachpan now.per mujhe barish chahiye abhi.

    how lovely it is, how romantic, lovely, cute, how how how much beautiful it is.

    what if amitabh bacchan ji recites it? :)

    somehow it reminded me of srikanta acharjee's song "amar sarata din meghla akash..brishti tomake dilam", though no connxtion is there excpt brishti. :)

    "kagaz ki kashtiyon mein ghar basane ko hota tha mann"---> the best line. :)

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  6. preeti...

    sachhi bolooo
    toh hawa par chadhana koi tumse seekhe..
    amitabh ko aur koi kaam nhi kya wo meri poem recite karega :|

    tum na :P

    muft ki tarife bandh rahi ho :P

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